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Post by scorpii on Jan 2, 2006 10:31:59 GMT 1
Jeey! you posted the next chapter! You are such a good author! I could almost feel the same they felt. Hope you'll write the next chapter asap, 'cause I want to read the rest of it!
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Post by sammie on Jan 8, 2006 2:31:34 GMT 1
Chapter 8:
It was dark by the time they left the hospital in with despair in there hearts. “Horatio, you should go home and get some sleep, you look tired.” “I will, after…” the bleeping of his phone cut him off mid sentence. “Horatio.” “Hey its Speed. Cochran was picked up ten minutes ago. There bringing him in.” “Thanks Speed I’m on my way.” He hung up and Calleigh looked at him inquisitively. “Lets get back to the lab.” and with that they left,
Horatio opened the door to the Interview room only to see the lawyer sitting handcuffed. He at down opposite and looked at him for a moment before speaking. “So where are the other girls then?” Horatio asked calmly, but firmly. He wasn’t messing anymore. “If I tell you…I want a pardon.” “I can’t guarantee you a pardon, but, I will let the courts know you cooperated fully.” Horatio stated. “..569 78th Street apartment C.” Cochran said “Thank you very much. I hope you enjoy your time in jail.” “Jail?” “Yup. Abduction and Conspiracy to Commit Murder..” Horatio said as he walked out the door.
“Speed.” Horatio called across the lad. “Yeah H?” “I need to you contact the Scottish Police again, get everything they have on Marcus and Heather Le Sommer. Tell them its related to the case.” “Will do.”
I was only a matter of minutes before a team was storming the building, Horatio waited outside as one officer walked out a black haired girl, she trembled as she walked, Horatio walked up to her and kneeled to eye level. “Ria?” he asked quietly, she nodded a nervous reply, “My names Horatio Caine, I’m from the crime lab…Is it ok if I talk to you?” she froze as her tears welled up, he could see it in her eyes, fear. “It’s ok Ria, no ones going to hurt you. I promise,” “okay..” she said in an almost whisper. “I think we should go somewhere quieter, I’m sure you don’t want to hang about here any more.” “Yeah.” she said nodding, He looked at the kid, she was few years younger than her sister, same blue eyes, same hair. Then he though how was he meant to tell this girl, her sister was in a coma…how was he going to her that everything was going to be okay, when there was doubt in his own mind. “Ok, your going to go with this officer to the hospital and I will be right behind you, okay?” “Yeah.”
AS the young girl was led away the rest of the team pulled up, ready for action. “So what have we got?” Horatio asked one officer. “Three dead bodies, all young females.” “Ok. Eric, Speed and Yelina take the scene, Calleigh come with me.” Horatio said before walking away, with Calleigh in toe. “I need you to go to the hospital and document Ria’s injuries…” He instructed her quietly. She nodded and walked over to the young girl. “Hello there, I’m Calleigh, what’s your name?” “Ria…are you a police woman?” “Yeah I am, Ria. That’s a pretty name.” Calleigh replied smiling, “How old are you?” “Thirteen.” Ria replied her voice, soft and quiet, her accent shone though, unlike her sister she was much more soft spoken and polite. “Ok, Now I’m going to take you to the hospital and get you looked at.” “For what?” Asked the thirteen year old as the breeze blew her dark hair across her face, she was barely up to Calleighs elbows. “To check that your ok, then well take some photographs of where they hurt you, is that okay?”, “I don’t want my photo taken.” Ria said, her voice harsh. “It’s very important you let me Ria, so we can catch the people who did this to you.” Calleigh explained. She noticed Ria’s eyes wonder away, turning around she saw two uniformed officers leading a male out the building. They stopped as Horatio addressed them. “Found him hiding in the attack.” “Take him downtown.” Horatio instructed, as she felt Ria throw her arms round her, she looked down to see the girl hysterically crying. “Ria, what’s wrong?” She asked the girl as she trembled, Her face pressed against Calleigh body as the tears soaked though her shirt. “Ria, did that man hurt you?” she asked her quietly, receiving only a nod. Calleigh lay her hand gently on Ria’s head. “Ria, your safe okay, he’s not going to hurt you.” she said as Ria grasped hold of Calleigh tighter. “Ria…” Calleigh said rubbing her back, in an attempt to calm her down. Calleigh felt the presence of Horatio beside her. “Ria everything’s going to be ok.” Calleigh said gently. “I want my mummy…I want my mummy.” Ria cried as she looked up at Calleigh, her eyes red from tears, she looked from Calleigh to Horatio to Calleigh. “ I want my mummy.” Ria repeated, with a fresh wave of tears.
Calleigh looked at Horatio, he paused and looked at the girl, he kneeled down and looked sadly at her. “Well talk about your mom later ok, but you need to go to the hospital first.” Horatio said to her, he kept eye contact as her, the tears in her dark blue eyes reflected the lights from the cars around. It was dark and cold, He watched her for a few seconds. “You cold?” he asked her. She nodded again. “Ok, Calleigh is going to take you to the hospital ok, and she’s going to take some photographs, then well have a little chat.” She nodded again as Horatio nodded to Calleigh who held her hand out, she felt it instantly snapped up by Ria as she lead her way.
“Poor kid.” Eric stated looking at Speed they began to process the scene as Alexx and her assistant moved the three young girls away. “She must be terrified.” Speed answered as he took multiple swabs from the blood pools. “I’ve got a foot print here.” he said following them with the torch, across the room to the door. He photographed them.
It took only an hour and a half before Horatio, Calleigh and Ria were sat in the interview room. “How are you?” Horatio asked Ria gently, “Okay…” her voice trailed off as she held back tears. “It’s ok, we know what happened, your sister told us.”, Ria’s head snapped up, she looked Horatio dead in the eye. “Sams alive?” she asked. Horatio looked down at the table then back to Ria. “Yes, she’s in hospital.” “Is she ok?” “Ria, she’s…she’s very ill.” Horatio said to her gently. “but….she’ll be ok wont she?”…Horatio didn’t know how to tell her, how in Gods name was he meant to tell her that her sister was in a coma. He sighed and looked at her pleading eye with a heavy heart. “Ria…Samantha’s in a coma. We don’t know what’s going to happen.” He said to her sadly, He watched her heart break. “A coma…bloody hell.” Ria whispered leaning back in the chair, looking at floor. “Do you know Pete Wendiz?” Horatio asked. “Yeah….he’s the one that took us, and he is friends with my brother.” “okay, what do you remember?” Horatio asked her gently. “We were walking home from school, because I lost my train pass and mum was really angry with me. Samantha decided to walk with me because she didn’t want me walking alone in the dark and we were walking along the canal and Pete stopped and said he was lost…
“Hey, Sammie, Ria you help me out I’m lost.” “Pete…how the fuck can you get lost you’ve lived here for twenty one years!” Samantha said laughing. “Don’t fucking laugh bitch” he snapped striking her across the face.
…he started yelling at Sam and calling her nasty names….
“What the hell is wrong with you Pete?” Ria asked confused as his friend rose out the car. Ria felt a hand across her mouth as she began to scream, it dragged her across the as she began to scream and kick her feet, she screamed louder as he twisted her wrist behind her back. She threw a kick blindly, hitting the man in the shin. As he yelped in pain, she felt pain then nothing.
…I asked Pete what was up and another dude got out the car and grabbed me, I started screaming and crying and I kicked him, he hit me then…I can’t remember what happened next. “ “It’s ok, your doing great.” Horatio said smiling. “I will be back in just a moment, but Calleigh is going to stay here and talk to you ok.” with a nod from Ria Horatio left the room, he found speed in the lab on the phone. He waited for the call to end, Speed looked up. “Confirmed, the Scottish Police found Heather and Marcus Le Sommer dead in their home a few hours ago.” “Right, thanks Speed. Anything else?” “Yeah the bullets match Pete’s gun, fingerprints match him, all the evidence points to him. “ “Thanks Speed.” Horatio felt as if a weight had been lifted off his shoulder. The murders of Ria and Samantha’s mother and brother were not his jurisdiction he hoped this would at least bring some sort of closure to them. Calling around he began to make inquires, after finding out their mother had made it clear in her will that if anything had happened to her the children were to be placed in the care of their aunt who lived in Los Angeles. After making the arrangements he went to see Alexx
“Hey.” He said walking though the door. Alex looked up and smiled at him. “Your three girls? Aleen Stephers, 14 from London England., bullet to the head, exicution style, same for the other two, Megan Kathlen, 16 from Aberdeen and Stephanie McDonald, 15 from Inverness, Scotland, all went missing on September 15th.” “Thanks Alexx.”
It wasn’t long before Horatio received the call saying Pete Wendiz was ready to be released into police custody. He walked in to the hospital room and came eye to eye with Pete Wendiz. “The doctors say you’re ready to go.” Horatio said blankly to him. “Peter Wendiz, I’m placing you under arrest for the murders of Aleen Stephers, Megan Kathlen, Stephanie McDonald, Sheila Andrews and Carol McBride the abduction of Ria and Samantha Le Sommer and the attempted murder of Samantha Le Sommer. You have the right to remain silent, Anything you say can be used against you in a court of law, You have the right to have an attorney present now and at any future questioning, If you can not afford one, one will be appointed to you free of charge by the state if you wish.” Horatio said to him as the accompanying officer cuffed him. “This time, your going to a place where you can never, ever do this again.”
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Post by scorpii on Jan 8, 2006 17:38:14 GMT 1
oh-my-god you're really a good writer. I don't hope your story is finished now, 'cause I like your way of writing. If it is finished, then I hope you'll write another story asap!
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Post by sammie on Jan 8, 2006 18:55:36 GMT 1
its not the end yet!
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Post by scorpii on Jan 9, 2006 15:48:30 GMT 1
Okay, good 'cause I want to read more of what you've written, I really like your way of writing! ;D
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Post by sammie on Jan 13, 2006 16:37:50 GMT 1
Chapter Nine.
With Pete safely under arrest Horatio and Calleigh took Ria to see her sister. “Ria I have to warn you that Samantha’s very ill, so don’t expect much okay.” Horatio warned. “Don’t expect her to respond to anything you say, a comas like a very deep sleep, we don’t know when she’ll wake up but she can hear you.” “Okay.” Ria said, she walked in to the room and stood by her sisters bed. She paused, looking at her sister. “Sam I’m here…I’m alive its ok.”
Ria….Ria?
“I’m okay, I wonder will you wake up?”
I want to wake up….
“I won’t be able to do it with out you. “
Oh god Ria….don’t even think about that!
Do you remember that song we wrote…when I was being bullied?” She asked her sister with tears running down her cheeks. She watched the machines keeping her alive, the blood pouring in to her arm, Questions flew around her head. Kneeling on the floor beside her
I remember…
“Horatio do you think this is right?” Calleigh asked him as they stood in the corridor. “Maybe its good Ria is here with her, give Sammie what she needs to wake up.” Horatio explained. The door was open as Horatio leaned against the frame, Calleigh looked at him and smiled, as a voice singing reached them both.
“Well If you wanted honesty that’s all you had to say, I never want to let you down or have you go, Its better of this way, for all the dirty looks, the photographs your boyfriend took, remember when you broke your foot from jumping out the second floor, I’m not okay, I’m not okay, you wear me out.”
I remember this…you still know it all?
“What will it take to show that its not the life it seams, I’ve told you time and time again you sing the words but don’t know what it means, To be a joke and look another line with out a hook, I held you close as we both shook for the last time - take a good hard look, I’m not okay, I’m not okay.”
You’ll be okay….
“Forget about the dirty looks, photographs your boyfriend took You said you read me like a book but the pages are all torn and frayed, Now I’m okay, But you really need to listen to be because I’m not okay, I’m not oh - fucking - kay.” Ria sang softly as she finished she felt a her sisters hand around hers…Ria’s head snapped up towards the door, “She moved,,,” she said to Horatio who instantly beckoned a nurse in to the room. The nurse gently picked up Samantha’s hand. “Honey…squeeze my hand.” the nurse said…as soon as the words were her mouth Horatio watched Samantha’s hand curial round the nurses, in seconds there were several doctors around Samantha’s bed as Ria stood at the door between Horatio and Calleigh.
“She moved, Calleigh , she moved.” Ria said with happiness in her voice. “Yeah.” Calleigh replied ruffling the child’s hair. Ria looked up at her and stuck out a tong whilst flatting her hair. Horatio smiled and chuckled to himself. It was several minutes before they were allowed in to see Samantha. “You okay?” Horatio asked her. “yeah…I feel as though I have a permanent hangover.” Samantha said smiling. “Sam…” Ria said with a tear in her eye. “C’mon, don’t cry.” Samantha said holding her arms open. Ria immediately flew in to them and hugged her sister. “We’ll be able to go home soon and see mum!” Ria said bouncing. Horatio felt his heart sink. “Ria…” Samantha started. She couldn’t finish it. “Ria, your mom and your brother were found this morning.” Horatio said, Ria instantly knew. He had no reason to finish.
He watched her as she stood still in shock. Her eyes met his. “No.” she said quietly. As tears began, she looked at Calleigh who just hugged her. “I’m sorry Honey.” she said as the child wept. “C’mon lets get you something to drink.” Calleigh said taking Ria out the room, Leaving Horatio with Samantha. “You sure your okay?” he asked her, “Yeah, thank you. Thank you for finding my sister.” she said to him. “Its what I do.” “No, you didn’t have to do anything Horatio. You didn’t have to come and see me, I heard you and Calleigh. Thank you so much.” she said to him. Horatio sat down and looked at her sadly. “You know where going to have to go through what happened.” “Okay.” “First of all where did you get the cell?” He asked her. Samantha looked at him sheepishly. “I swiped it off the desk outside the room in the lab.” she said truthfully. “I don’t know whose it was.” “I think it might have been Calleigh,” he answered. Samantha made a mental note to apologise to Calleigh. She told Horatio everything how she snapped the pen and cut her self, the note. He smiled telling her she did great. “Pete is in police custody. He wont be getting off with it Samantha.” He said to her. “How long do you think he’s going to get.” “Let me put it this way, the only way he’s getting out is in a body bag.” Horatio told her. She sighed. “Thank you, for everything.” Samantha said again. “Sammie, what have you got to thank me for?” Horatio asked confused. “For saving my life…not listing to me and bringing me closure. You know, back at the…place…I was so frightened, when he pulled the trigger. I was so sure I was going to die, but you came…I didn’t think you would. Then you came and I begged you to let me die…because I didn’t want to go on. I thought I’d lost Ria…and Ria gives me a reason to be here, man she’s my little sister. I’d do anything for my her, because she’s my family. I wouldn’t think twice about taking a bullet for her.” “That’s what you do for family, anything.” Horatio said sadly. “So, just thank you…I wouldn’t be here if it wasn’t for you.” “Think nothing of it. “ he said simply. “Now you rest. You’re mother made it clear she wanted you placed in the care of your aunt if anything happened to her.” “Okay.” Samantha said yawning. Horatio said his goodbye and walked outside to find Calleigh comforting a extremely distraught Ria.
It took a while for her to calm down. Ria stayed with social services until their aunt arrived. Then Samantha was released Two weeks later from hospital. She had made a full recovery and the case against Pete was made. It was time for them to leave Miami, for the mean time. Samantha stood on the top step outside the lab, the hot Miami wind in her hair, a arm round her sisters shoulder. She could here her aunt and Horatio talking about dates and random stuff. Ria and her aunt both said their good byes and waited in the car. Samantha turned to him and smiled. “So what you going to do now?” He asked her. “I don’t know.” Samantha said sighing. “Were going to fly over to Glasgow tomorrow for the funeral. Then back to California” Samantha said sadly. “Take care of yourself.” He said placing a hand on her shoulder. “Don’t worry, I’m tougher than I look.” Her hair blew across her face in the wind, hiding the sadness in her eyes. “Take care of yourself Horatio.” she said to him, they locked eyes. “We’ll meet again, be it in this life or the next.” He said shaking her hand. They both smiled as Samantha took a last look at the place that nearly killed her, but gave her new life.
The End.
Credits:
Author: Samantha Le Sommer Co-Author: Heather Carls. Beta: Heather Carls. Muse: Heather Carls. Advice. Heather and Siouxla Le Sommer
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Post by scorpii on Jan 13, 2006 18:09:43 GMT 1
soooo beautiful! Damn, wish I could write like you!
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Post by sammie on Jan 13, 2006 20:11:50 GMT 1
it comes with practice!
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Post by scorpii on Jan 14, 2006 14:08:25 GMT 1
hahaha, okay, then I'll write a lot when I've nothing to do ;D
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Post by sammie on Jan 14, 2006 15:36:28 GMT 1
^___^
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Post by scorpii on Jan 14, 2006 21:00:43 GMT 1
lol ;D
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