Lee
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Post by Lee on Mar 11, 2006 15:38:53 GMT 1
Title: CSI new boy Part 1 of about 10 New Caracter Added: Me!! ;D Ecklie walked up to Grissom and frowned "We have a new recruit for you!" Grissom didn't know what to say but in the ned he agreed.
"Please follow me" Grissom said. Lee nerviously followed Grissom to the breifing room. Grissom put Lee and Sara [Not a good Mix! ] on a 419. Nick, Warrick and Catherine got assigned to a multiple 419. Sara looked at Grissom and said "Are you not going on a case?" Grissom looked up at Sara and replied with "Nope.". Lee and Sara started walking to the GMC
"Hi Sara, im Lee, the new kid on the team." Lee said.
"Hi, im Sara Sidle, CSI-3"
Lee and Sara got into the GMC and drove off Straight after Lee and Sara, Nick, Catherine and Warrick all left HQ.
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Lee
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Post by Lee on Mar 12, 2006 12:55:43 GMT 1
Title CSI-New Boy Part: 2 of about 10 New caracter added: Me! ;D
Lee and Sara got to the crime scene, they both got out and walked towards Brass.
"Hi Brass." Sara Said.
"Hi, who is this with you?" Brass questioned
"Oh, this is Lee Smithy, a new recruit"
"Oh, hi Lee, im detective Jim Brass."
"Hi, What have we got?" Lee asked
"419, dead boy" Jim signed
Sara muttered "God, i Hate these Cases!"
Lee and Sara walked up to the boy and imidatley noticed a gun shot wound and knew straight away this was a dump scene, not the primary scene.
Lee said "Glazzed eyes, suggests Vic has been dead for about 5 days."
Sara looked at the gun shot wound, "Through and through"
Mean while on the other side of town Nick, Warrick, and Catherine got to there multiple 419.
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Lee
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Post by Lee on Mar 12, 2006 18:12:48 GMT 1
Title: CSI new Boy Part 3 of about 10 New caracer added: Me! ;DLee found some tire prints and took photos of them, Meanwhile Sara was examining the body.
"Hey Lee, i got some Fibres"
"Ok, you know what to do" Lee replied
Sara looked up and said "Lee, do you mind taking all the evidene back to Greg?" Sara gave Lee her puppy eyes, Lee sighe and replied with
"Ok, how can i resist that face of yours?"
Sara looked down and Sniggered, Sara's phone then went:
"Sara?" a voice said
"Yes, this is Sara Sidle"
"Grissom here, i am sending all other CSI's to this case because F.B.I have took the other Case, So is that ok?"
"Yes of course."
"Ok, everyone will be with you in about 10 minutes."
"Oh, by the way..." Grissom said
"How is Lee Doing?"
Sara took a long breath and said:
"Yes, he has recovered the evidence well and is on his way to Greg with Fibres, you want me to ring him and tell him your waiting?"
"Yes please."
"Ok, see you Grissom."
Sara rang Lee and told him to go straight to Grissom.
Lee nerveiously walked to Grissom. Grissom gave Lee a good comment!
Lee Then walked to Doc Robbins autopsy room. Sara went to Interview some Witnesses.
"Hi, im Sara Sidle, Las Vegas Crime Lab, about the Boy, did you see or Hear Anything?"
"Yes, i heard Tyres Screech at about...erm...10...no.....1...dam! I can't remember!" The witness then broke down in tears
"Its Ok, i will give you some time to remember what Happened."
Sara walked upto the officer and said,
"Don't let him go, hes a suspect i think."
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scorpii
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Post by scorpii on Mar 14, 2006 14:42:15 GMT 1
It's an okay story, but it shouldn't move that fast I think... though I like it!
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